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Chapter 6 - The Audit

On Monday morning, Thomas Wright called me from First National Bank.

"Mr. Brooks," Wright said, his tone professional yet urgent. "Our internal fraud division finished a complete retrospective audit of Mia’s account history, as well as several linked family accounts, per the police subpoena."

I sat up straight in my desk chair at work. "Did you find something else?"

"We did," Wright said, lowering his voice slightly. "When Vanessa submitted that forged secondary authorization form eighteen months ago, she didn't just give herself wire transfer privileges. She also linked Mia's high-yield savings account as a secondary overdraft protection backup for a joint checking account she held with her son, Ryan."

My blood ran cold. "Overdraft protection?"

"Yes," Wright confirmed. "Meaning, if Ryan’s business account ran negative, the system was configured to automatically pull funds directly from Mia’s savings account to cover the difference without triggering a manual wire alert."

"My God..." I whispered, horror rising in my chest. "She didn't just try to steal thirty-eight thousand dollars last week. She set up a siphon eighteen months ago!"

"Precisely," Wright said. "However, because Mia’s account was classified as an restricted student asset, the automatic siphon failed twice in the past year due to system errors. That’s why Vanessa was forced to log in manually last Tuesday to execute the direct wire transfer—she realized the automated siphon wasn't working."

"Can you provide those audit logs to Detective Miller?" I asked, my knuckles white as I gripped the phone.

"They have already been delivered to the District Attorney's office," Wright replied. "Mr. Brooks, this evidence elevates the charges from simple attempted theft to premeditated financial predation over an extended period. The DA is treating this as a high-priority felony case."

Ten minutes after hanging up with Wright, my phone rang again. This time, it was an unfamiliar number with an area code from downtown Chicago.

"David Brooks?" a sharp, female voice asked.

"Speaking."

"My name is Victoria Vance. I am the criminal defense attorney representing Vanessa Brooks-Miller."

I leaned back in my chair, adjusting my tone to match her icy professionalism. "Ms. Vance. I assume you're calling to discuss a plea deal."

"I am calling to offer a resolution that saves this family from a lengthy, embarrassing public trial, Mr. Brooks," Vance said smoothly. "My client is prepared to sign a formal confession to misdemeanor trespass and pay a five-thousand-dollar restitution fee to Mia, provided all felony fraud and grand larceny charges are dropped immediately."

I almost laughed out loud. "Five thousand dollars? For a premeditated attempt to steal thirty-eight thousand dollars after forging my name and setting up an illegal overdraft siphon for eighteen months?"

There was a slight pause on the line. Vance clearly hadn't expected me to know about the overdraft siphon yet.

"Mr. Brooks," Vance tried again, her tone tightening. "If this goes to trial, your entire family will be dragged through public record. Your daughter will have to testify on the stand. Is that really what you want for an eighteen-year-old girl entering her freshman year of college?"

"My daughter is stronger than you think, Ms. Vance," I replied coldly. "And she has nothing to be ashamed of. My sister, on the other hand, belongs in prison."

"You're being unreasonable—"

"No," I cut her off sharply. "Unreasonable was demanding twenty thousand dollars from a teenager in my backyard. Unreasonable was forging my name on bank documents. Tell your client we will see her in court."

I hung up the phone before she could reply.

I immediately called Mia, who was finishing her shift at the bookstore.

"Hey, Dad," she answered cheerfully. "Everything okay?"

"Mia," I said softly. "The bank found out that Vanessa tried to set up an automatic drain on your account over a year ago. The District Attorney is moving forward with full felony charges. Their lawyer tried to push for a weak plea deal, but I turned it down."

There was a pause on the line. I waited, wanting to make sure Mia was comfortable with where this was heading.

"Good," Mia said firmly. "Don't let her off, Dad. If she doesn't face the full consequences, she'll just do it to someone else."

I smiled proudly into the receiver. "That's my girl. I'll pick you up after work, and we'll go get dinner."

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"Deal," she said happily. "My treat. I still have my forty thousand dollars!"

We both laughed—a clean, genuine laugh that felt like light breaking through dark storm clouds.

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